Censorship part 2

[Lara Phillips]

Hey guys, I’d like your feedback on the controversial sexual assault scene from Ministry #3. Here are two pages from it. Keep in mind that these are only 2 pages so it’s not in the context of the entire story. They aren’t for kiddies so only follow the link if you’re over age. Let me know what you think. Even if you don’t agree, as long as your opinion is well-thought and polite, I’m keen for the input :)

http://punisherfemme.deviantart.com/art/Controversial-Scene-part-1-...

http://punisherfemme.deviantart.com/art/Controversial-Scene-part-2-...

Ministry #3 isn’t available yet but you can check out Ministry #1 at

http://www.drunkduck.com/Ministry/

And purchase Issue 1 and 2 through Indyplanet
http://www.indyplanet.com/index.php?id=1579

[Steve Butler]

Its really hard to comment on the two pages without the context but here I go anyway.

Given it will always be a difficult thing to get right I thought that the pages were about right. IMHO I think that panel 1 on the second page shouldn't have shown all of the breast as I think it would have had more power with less displayed. That said, it didn't look gratuituous or over the top.